There is a definite learning curve to this wet-in-wet style with lots of patience playing into it. You can't just go in and paint and watch the pigment diffuse and lighten over and over. At some point, you have to wait until the paper is more matte dry (not dry but drier than when you first put down all that water and pigment) and then sharpen some areas. And if you don't wait, you just get blurred, muddy stuff. Like this one became. A mess, really.
So...I started over, following the directions in the Ewa Karpinska book more carefully and this is the start of the new one...
I'll darken and shape this one more. I'm not crazy about that lime green background but blame myself for not thinking enough about that (I was concentrating on the leaves and rosehips). Maybe I can go in and drop some more darker and varied color in the background later?
I guess what I'd like is somewhere between the top and bottom painting - not so soft but not so hard-edged, either. Ugh! OK, keep trying...