Tweaked a bit more but any more and I'll ruin it. Every time you do one thing, you have to do another to work on the values throughout. So less is more - always!
Bella Donna, 1/4 sheet Fabriano Artistico cold press 140# watercolor paper.
My thanks to Joan, Dawn, Myrna, Teresa, Deb, Susan, Nava and Ann for your comments on this one as it took shape.