It's better than the first version.
I used Indanthrone Blue + Quinacridone Burnt Scarlet for the mix on his body - with a touch of Chinese White on his back and knees to lighten them a bit.
I've gone through the JSSargent book and drooled over the paintings there - that man loved to travel and returned to the same places over and over to document and paint what he saw.
Now on to the second book I got for Valentine's Day - which should take me a month to go through! But already learning more about watercolor - and American watercolor, in particular.